This is my current story, Angelo! Read and enjoy and if any people from Kidpub.com are here comment on this!

 

Aidan Day trudged on his lengthy journey back from school, the dust rose like little  sepia clouds under his feet and then swept along in the weak summer draught. He had a slightly tattered leather satchel slung over his left shoulder and a blade of  brittle  straw-yellow grass between his teeth. His olive green blazer was rolled up at the sleeves and his shirt was furrowed and un-tucked. His little brother Colin Day sprinted towards him from behind and slowed to a gentle saunter beside him. He panted heavily and showed Aidan a sky blue feather, as he opened his fist.

He panted heavily and explained after  catching enough breath to speak. “This is a feather of the extremely rare navy robin,” explained Colin excitedly.

“Wow!” mocked Aidan sarcastically.

“Whatever,” retorted the nine year old, “but this is worth at least ten pounds to the museum. They don’t have any of these.”

“Yeah, while you get your ten quid every bird feather you get every month or so. I’ll be doing weekly shows with Angelo.” Laughed Aidan without turning around to see the feather.

“Shut up,” whined Colin, “ I don’t see what’s so good about a stupid fox with a silly name like Angela or Angel…………….”

“Angelo!” corrected Aidan angrily, he called down quickly and ruffled his murky blond hair.

 

Aidan glanced at his hefty brass watch and replied. “I’m teaching him to do tricks and stuff. He knows out to do flips and jump through hoops.”

“You treat it like a circus freak!” argued Colin.

“Since when is Angelo an ‘it’ Colin?” snapped Aidan quickly.

 

Colin blushed red and hung back a little. They were approaching the forest, the last league of their journey home from school. They reached the fringe of the petite forest, the alders and oaks towered above like giants forts. The two brothers had ventured a few metres into the shallow forest when they heard the  watery prattle of a babbling stream. Aidan crouched near the stream and took a sifter from his pocket, he had once found a wedge of gold in there. Occasionally he checked for another, he sifted and searched for ten minutes and soon Colin grew impatient.

“Hurry up,” he yelled finally, “you check here every other day and you find nothing. Its just a big waste of ti-“

“ Says the idiot who chases birds all day,” replied Aidan coolly.

 

He lifted up the sifter and dried it with a deadened dock leaf, and placed it back in his satchel. He reached in his satchel and pulled out a solid bronze notebook, ornate and hand made by his uncle Breck. He recorded the state of the stream in literature then performed a quick sketch. He then took a lush leaf and stuck it into the book with a square of translucent tape.

“Why do you do that?” asked Colin puzzled, his embarrassment had been conquered by intrigue.

“I’m making a diary of this stream,” replied Aidan, “this stream is mine you see.” He pointed at the flag smugly made out of linen and bore vertical stripes of black, green then white.

“How does that make it your stream?” asked Colin promptly.

“Well you see I discovered it, so marking it with my flag makes it mine,” he said cleverly, “this diary not only proves my ownership but gives me a better understanding into the nature of Day Creek.”

“Day Creek? Cool name!” said Colin excitedly, “why don’t you pay this much attention in Maths?”

“Eh, Maths doesn’t get ya famous does it. Does Maths get your name on a book cover, or title you as the composer of a symphony or get your masterpiece in Tate Modern? No!” responded Aidan passionately.

“Ok, ok!” said Colin quickly, “just a joke.”

 

They finally neared the cosy speck of farmland they lived on. The sea of clovers were trampled daily but grew back as if by magic. A flock of crows were hovering over the crops but Aidan shouted loudly and scared them off. Day & Donegal Farm was a unique farm, that specialised in training elite sheepdogs which were sold off all over Munster, Ireland. Aidan’s dad Alan Day was training a new mutt in the field and shouted a hello to them as they stepped up to the porch of the huge farm house.

 

Even though Day & Donegal was a tiny speck in the country greens of Limerick, the farmhouse was massive and the fields were spread wide. Aidan slumped down in the living room and continued a story in his weathered leather journal.

“Ye know your middle name is Teague for a reason,” said his mum form the doorway, Aidan looked round, “ Teague means ‘poet’ and we could see from an early age you damn well were one!”

“Thanks mum,” said Aidan and smiled.

 

“There some sausage and mash on the table if ye want any,” she stated, “if it turns cold warm it up in are new microwave!”

 

Aidan’s mum had been wanting to get microwave for donkeys years, but Alan said the were dangerous radioactive death traps. However, after many years of his stubbornness being eroded away by her nagging he gave in. Adair Donegal trudged in from feeding the pigs and shearing the sheep. Mr. A. Donegal was the original owner of the farm and Alan Day worked for him training his sheepdogs. Though since the sheepdogs brought more business than the rest of the farm combined, Donegal kindly shared the farm half ‘n half with Alan Day. Adair was now fairly old, around the slowing age of fifty five. Even though his hairs had greyed silver his face was still as young as Alan’s and his body still hanging on to it’s muscular figure.

 

Looking closer Aidan could see he was fuming with rage. His face was drenched in glistening sweat and his brow crumpled lividly, into a ‘V’ shape. His breathing was loud and ragged and his nostrils flared.

“What’s the matter?” asked Aidan’s mother, Kerry. She hurried over and pressed a cup of herbal tea into his hands.

 

Adair engrossed the cup in his vice like grip, until he crushed the porcelain teacup into tiny white shards.

“ Aye!” cried Kerry hotly, “ it’s your cup anyway!” Kerry was usually a kindly person with a friendly disposition but when she felt like it she was more fiery then a hearth doused in petrol.

“Sorry, Kerry. It’s just these teenage bastards are always coming along and ruining my crop, and even spooking ma cattle! Ole Lana got scared one to many times and now she’s nought but a shivering wreck……”

 

Kerry looked at Adair’s despairing eyes and tried in vane to comfort him. “It’s okay we’ll fix Lana, she’s  a tough ole-”

“No we won’t fix her!” he put his hand to his head, “I put her down this morning, she wasn’t eating……..”

 

Alan came in, tired and in a similar mood except less passionate. “Damn teens…….” he whispered under his breath. He shook his boots of and kicked them to a corner in the porch. He tramped upstairs without saying another word.

“Honey, aint ye gonna have any dinner?” asked Kerry softly.

“No!” shouted Alan back.

 

Meanwhile, Colin was oblivious to the happenings on the inside. He was ridding around the field on his pony Cliff. He was a strong chestnut steed with a pure white strip running up from his nose and a bray that echoed in the fields and hills. Colin halted Cliff as he heard anomalous voice through the trotting of Cliff’s hooves. He dismounted the chestnut pony and took a fallen staff of birch, and wielded it like a wooden sword. The noise was coming from the hedges.

“Hit us then,” mocked a dark voice as two teenagers emerged from the dense hedge. Colin was frozen with fear.

“Is the little baby scared,” mocked the second teen making a rude gesture with his hand.

 

Colin sauntered back and then ran to Cliff. He jumped higher then he had ever jumped before and swung himself onto Cliff’s back. He spurred Cliff on and charged at the teens, he swung his staff and knocked over one teen. Though when Cliff turned the other teen had unveiled a large Swiss knife and was brandishing it menacingly. Colin was startled immensely by the sight and fell off his horse and hit the grass hard.

 

The teen advanced and Colin fought he was done for. Suddenly, Aidan ran across the field with a loaded bow in his hands. Aidan was a master of archery and confidently stepped to Colin’s side. He raised the bow forebodingly.

“Drop your damn knife or I swear to God I’ll shoot!” he warned loudly.

 

The teenager was arrogant and stood there grinning stupidly. Aidan could see his confidence fading in his eyes, he was like a merciless hunter. Aidan squinted and aimed quickly not letting a millisecond go by before he………

SHOT!

 

The teen screamed, “holy Shiite!”

 

He loosed the arrow and it soared right into pocket of the teen’s baggy jeans, and neatly cutting through the belt so his trousers had to be held up by his hands. The teen was startled and dropped knife and ran off as soon as he regained his wits, pulling up his trousers as he scuttled off. Aidan watched him run, and lowered the longbow slowly. He strode forward proudly and picked the knife up as a trophy.

“Wait, where’s Angelo? I haven’t seen him all day!” cried Aidan worriedly.

 

He ran back to the farm house and tried to make his way upstairs but was stopped by his dad.

“I saw you out there,” he said proudly, “defending your brother, using wit and skill. Ye brother wasn’t so bad either until he got scared and fell off his horse!”

“Thanks dad!” replied Aidan happily, praise from his dad was rare and treasured, “but if you saw me out there why didn’t you help!”

“Sons of Day are capable of amazing things, like my ability to speak to dogs for example!”

“Ye can’t really speak to dogs!”

 

Alan tapped his nose trice and walked away mysteriously. Aidan rushed upstairs to his room in the attic and as usual in the corner was Angelo curled up in his cotton blankets, asleep. He clicked his fingers on his left hand and the little red fox cub arose in a blink of an eagles eye, fully awake and alert. Aidan tapped his foot and he flipped cutely and landed on his feet perfectly in the same spot.

“Very good!” praised Aidan.

 

The fox wagged its tail like a puppy.

“You have to stop doing that, it’s to dog like,” commented Aidan.

The little fox barked cheekily and trotted next to his feet. Aidan took a rap of grease paper from his pocket and took a wedge of bacon from it. He threw it in the air and Angelo jumped high into the air and snapped it up greedily.

 

“ Okay boy, lets go outside,” he said clapping his hand which meant follow him, “we both got practise to do.”

 

Soon they were outside in a fallow field covered in shamrocks and scrubby grassland. Aidan  had two lit Hawaiian style torches in his hand. Aidan had many talents including juggling fire! He had learnt when a band of foreign performers came to the village near Day & Donegal Farm. The master of the fire-tricksters was performing a mind-blowing routine, but Aidan being his arrogant self dared to smirk and snigger.

The fire-trickster invited him to try and he scorched himself. Spurred on by arrogant pride he kept on trying and eventually he perfected the skill, after two years of diligent training.

 

Aidan lit the torches with his dads gilt lighter and flipped the left torch. It was summer and the heat of the flame, and the glare of the sun brought sweat to his brow. He began to juggle the flaming torches, and gradually they became faster and faster until it was a blurred ring of fire. Aidan clicked his tongue, and Angelo stepped backwards for a run up! Angelo ran forward and pounced cleanly through the ring of fire!

“Well done Angelo!” congratulated Aidan as he took out a suede mini notebook and wrote a passage in it.

“This is to record your progress,” he said to Angelo as if he could really understand.

 

Angelo licked his lips in reply. To him that notebook looked like a tasty rap of meaty cowhide! It was beginning to get dark and the lighter was out of ignition oil, so Aidan beckoned to Angelo that it was time to head inside. They walked across the field as the sun disappeared over the horizon and were safely guided back to the farmhouse by the last dregs of sunlight.

 

Meanwhile, in the local village McGilly Lynn a shady meeting was being held in the abandoned half-wreck of Shackle Way. The crumbling hall was a giant shack made of beams of birch and pillars of oak. Furnished with cheap plastic tables and chairs, with the floor strewn with every manner disgusting and destructive items. The hall was filled with raucous men and boys, drinking and fighting. At the head table sat a counsel of ominous villains, plotting and conspiring deeds of utter vice and immorality. At the head of the head table, dressed in black attire and wielding a gun was the notorious Carrack Saint. His mouth was veiled by a bandanna like a terrorist and he wore a onyx cape like a tyrant. His eyes were icy blue and stopped hearts with a stare.

“…….But my liege, how are we to overcome the village when we are so greatly outnumbered?” questioned Finn Leister, he was Carrack’s favourite sniper. However, that did not protect him from his anger!

“You dare doubt me, scourge of Munster, Satan of Limerick! You dare doubt I who-” bellowed Carrack.

“No master, I’m just sayi-”

“Silence worm, you dare interrupt me!” raged carrack loudly, his voice echoed through the hall like thunder and everyone fell quiet.

“Now, this,” he said coolly, pulling a gun from a wooden crate, “is a Blarney47- Enforcer, or as some people call it a BE47.”

 

It was a hefty handgun with a classic style silver handgun, with a revolver barrel and red wooden handle. “This is one of the strongest handguns in Britain!” shouted Carrack, there was a round of hearty applause. “With this we shall take over McGilly Lynn and make away with every scrap of money!” at this there was a louder round of applause. A man stood, his torso laden with rippling muscles and his short cut red hair glowed like fire. His name was Conan, “Sire, I do not doubt you but how do we avoid the authorities?” he growled. Carrack smiled under his bandanna and raised the gun, Conan cowered in fear. Carrack shot and hit his beer glass, “that question can be answered easily. We t shall assassinate the authorities first, it shall happen gradually then suddenly!” His voice chilled the hall like spilling an icy ale down your trousers. He held the Blarney47 up like a sword or a flag and yelled a war cry, they all did the same, “LIIIAAAARRRRGGGHHH!!!”

 

Back at the Day & Donegal farmhouse Aidan was just about to go to bed, after spending a few hours browsing KidPub. KidPub was kids writing website were kids posted stories and commented on them, Aidan was one of the most powerful members in the group. He shut his Mac laptop, or palmtop as he called it as it was so small and petite. The attic was a fairly good room, on the up side it was spacious with plenty of room for all types of things. On the down side, it was hard to clean and very dusty and cobweb ridden in the corners! Clover was back from McGilly Lynn village. She was Aidan’s seventeen year old sister, who spent most of the day up in the Guildhall of Oxford learning Music and writing.

“Just come of KidPub I see, you know I was very well respected on KP,” laughed Clover shaking her short blond hair.

“Well lately people have been calling me arrogant! Am I arrogant?” asked Aidan sadly.

“It’s all drama, when so many brilliant minds swirl together. Plus who can blame you for being a little arrogant with all those talents of yours?”

“So you think I am arrogant?” asked Aidan, a little startled.

“Well frankly bro, yes!” she sighed, “but it’s part of what makes you….. you!”

“Whatever!”Aidan flopped down into the covers and beckoned for his sister to leave.

“I heard about that teen you beat. By the sounds of it I bet he was shitting his pants as he stood and ran!” she chuckled trying desperately to change the subject.

“Don’t swear!” hissed Aidan cautiously.

“Hush, little bro. As a fellow writer you should know that ‘for some things there is only one word’: As the expression goes,” she said calmly.

 

Aidan reopened his Mac palmtop and opened a Word Document. It was long and was titled Lilt.

“What is it about?” asked Clover curiously.

Aidan grinned proudly,  “ it’s about a Greek harpist running away from the soldiers of Midas. She uses her music to charm snakes and bend men to her will and eventually makes it to mount Olympus were she writes a symphony with Apollo and-“

“Wow there little bro, let you writing do the story........ if it can!”

“Just read it then,” replied Aidan with a droplet of arrogance in his voice.

 

 

She began to read out loud:

 

Lilt

As the silky rays of sunlight dappled the hills of Athens a young girl sat under the shade of an ancient olive tree. In her slender hands she held a beautiful gilt harp, enchanted by Apollo and cursed by Hades-

 

 

“Wait, wait,” said Clover, “this is genius, but do you expect any normal kid or even an adult to understand half the damn crap you put in here!”

“Shut up!” wailed Aidan defensively.

“Bro, it’s just constructive criticism….”

“Constructive criticism doesn’t include the words ‘damn crap’” shouted Aidan back. He dived under the duvet and Clover gave up and left the room.

 

Clover trudged down the stairs and into the kitchen. Adair was there fixing himself a midnight snack. A sandwich with bread fresh from the oven stuffed and filled with a few slices of garlic ham and red Leicester cheese.

“Good evening Clover, a little late isn’t it,” greeted Adair through a mouthful of ham, cheese and bread.

“Adair!” she said blushing slightly, “I’m seventeen, I don’t have a curfew or bedtime.”

“You’ll always be that carefree little girl to me……..” sighed Adair.

“Well, I’m growin’ up and soon I’ll be out of here. Off to Cork, Dublin and London to fulfil my dreams.” She replied as she set to making a piece of toast and buttered it with a knob of Clover butter.

“Ye know we didn’t name you after are beloved clover and shamrock, but that very butter,” chuckled Adair, “Ya ole daddy used to work for ‘em until he decided he wanted to do what he was best at!”                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       

“And what was that then?” she humoured.

“You know perfectly well what that is!” he muttered

“For the last time he can’t talk to dogs!” she groaned, “I admit he has an…….eerie command over canines and so does Aidan but it’s just a little talent they learnt OK!”

“Whatever ya say Clove whatever ye say………”  

 

Clover and Adair turned round, a navy robin was tweeting outside. It caught Clovers eye for a nanosecond and then took off upwards. The navy robin perched itself on Colin’s window ledge, which was a cosy room on the second floor overlooking the back of the farm. Colin was in bed under his covers with flashlight, he was reading The Encyclopaedia of British Birds. He was trying to clear his mind of what happened that afternoon, how that vandal had nearly maimed him or worse. If Aidan hadn’t been there he could have been seriously hurt, but then drifting into his mind were the things he did. Like jumping on Cliff and charging that urchin down with his staff like a cavalry knight, but then he had fallen of his steed like a little kid as soon as he saw the knife.

 

Colin shut the big brown volume with a thud, and placed it on his bedside table. He slumped into bed and fell asleep. As he fell asleep, back in the now dark village streets of McGilly Lynn the revolution was starting. Three police officers walked the streets on patrol, Kenny, Sean and Faber. Faber was the youngest, still with no beard on his chin and Kenny a hot-headed middle aged man. Sean was Deputy Chief of Police and was a fairly old bloke with ample experience.

“Aye chief, ay could of sworn I heard footsteps,” muttered Faber.

“At this time of night?” interrupted Kenny.

“Hmm I hear them to!” growled Sean.

Conan and Lee, two assassins from Carrack’s gang crouched in the shadows ready to pounce. Both carried silence Blarney47 Enforcers, supplied by Carrack. The two policemen walked around the corner cautiously, the air was rippled by a bullet and Kenny fell dead. Sean’s training kicked in and he ducked quickly as a bullet fired overhead. Lee shifted position so he was in another bush, while Conan openly revealed himself and charged at Faber. Faber swung his fist wildly and felt his hand connect with Conan’s nose, but Conan was muscular and well trained and took the punch with ease before returning a blow. Faber tumbled to the ground and braced himself as Conan hastily aimed the gun at Faber’s head but hit his shoulder. Faber yelled in pain and thought fast, he decided the best thing to do was to play dead. Sean on the other hand was putting up quite a fight, he punched Lee three times as Lee in vane shot bullets everywhere. One rogue bullet pierced Sean’s side and he yelled out, Conan came and finished Sean of with a quick hard left hook punch. Faber sobbed silently, he had to do something. He leapt up and hit Lee in the head and took his gun. He aimed the gun at his head in anger, then at his leg and shot. As Lee cried out in pain he shot again, just to make sure he would never walk again!

“I hate you!” yelled Faber as he took another shot at Lee. He took a shot at Conan, but he ran off.

Faber crouched next to Chief Sean, he took a pulse. There was none. 

 

The dawn rose upon Day & Donegal Farm, the sun looked red like the blood that had been spilt the last night. It was a lazy Saturday morning, yet Aidan’s day was completely packed. He a rugby tournament today at school and then after that a funeral of the victim of a bizarre assassination, apparently it was Sean O’Connell Deputy Chief of Police. While Aidan showered and dressed for his rugby match, Colin was out in the fallow field a shovel and magnet in hand. In the province of McGilly Lynn they used to have their own currency from ancient times called a plove or a plint. It was now a children tradition to find them and convert them to Euros for sweet-money.

 

       

 

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              

 

   



 
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